Tuesday, October 30, 2007

Adveryising

Advertisement has both merits and demerits. We can get many information on advertisement. For example, price, the place of origin and so on. But we cannot see quality of goods. Therfore we must ascertain reliability of advertising.

2 comments:

y.m said...

By using an example, this paragraph is easy to understand.

yuriko said...

If you draw a clear connection between topic sentence and example,your paragraph become very well from now.